书面表达（20分）请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文：一家宾馆新开业，为吸引外国宾客，希望在互联网上进行宣传，用英文写一篇介绍，主要内容包括：1.地点：距离白山入口处500米。2.房间及其价格：单人间，共20间：100元/天；双人间，共15间，150元/天；热水淋浴3.餐饮：有餐厅（提供中餐和西餐）；有咖啡厅（提供茶，咖啡等）4.游泳池：全天免费开放5.欢迎预定注意：词数不少于80词，开头已经写好；可以适当增加细节；使行文连贯Welcome to Baishan Mountain HotelBaishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
| One possible version: Baishi Mountain Hotel is now open for business. Our hotel stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishi Mounatian. It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. A single room is 100 yuan and a double room 150 yuan for one night. You are advised to book in advance. The hotel serves 3 meals a day and there are Chinese food and western food for you to choose from. You can also enjoy yourself at the café drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool which is open all day and free of charge. All are welcome! |
| 试题分析：本文的写作首先按照题目的顺序对宾馆的位置进行介绍stands 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishi Mounatian.然后对房间、价格情况进行介绍It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers.在句式上可以多用介词来连词成句，又表达自然贴切，再对餐饮和游泳池的情况进行介绍，重点突出免费We also have a swimming pool which is open all day and free of charge.最后呼吁大家提前预定并表示欢迎You are advised to book in advance. All are welcome! 点评：应用文是比较容易写的文体，平时学生的练习也比较多。写的过程中注意避免使用中式英文，对于表达内容层次时需要使用平时积累的层次关系的短语，多使用被动，倒装、虚拟来提升作文的美度。在平时写作时应该多进行阅读，对阅读过程中写的好的表达要进行积累，并且学以致用，勤积累，多背诵，这样才能作文才能稳步的提升。 |