英语翻译组合或说是排比的句子。”

Question

Therefore, "The Belt and Road Initiative" is not just to construct hardware, such as the connection of roads, it also involves the construction of system and mechanism.这里面 roads, it also involves中的逗号是不是要变句号？Word软件里总是画线的（病句）。但是感觉用句号，跟中文就有了出入
WORD病句划线如图，如果说两个逗号中是要加AND，句子意思就有出入了啊

Answer 1

因此,“带和道路倡议”不仅仅是构建硬件,如道路的连接,它也涉及到体制机制的建设。

Answer 2

把逗号后面改成 but also involves 试试。因为前后主语一致，所以不需要重复 it, 这样word应该就不会把它当作两个句子了。追问

前面是is not just to , 后面是but also involve这样构成一个组合句是可以的吗？总觉得排比句保持一直，to...，to... and to...

追答

确实是，那这样呢：is to construct not just hardware... but also the system and mechanism.

追问

这样子我可以理解，可中文是酱紫的：因此，“一带一路”不仅仅是道路连通等硬件建设，还涉及体系和机制构建。

追答

中文“是”和“涉及”也不是排比呀，一定要一样么？或者改前半句：involves the construction not only of the hardware, but also of the system。感觉越改越乱了(ノ_＜)…… 还不如第一个。还是别太抠字眼了，意思都表达清楚就好嘛。

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