如何写好雅思写作小作文的对比

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第1个回答  2017-01-12
可以考虑杨左使的写作结构班,提高自己的写作技巧。
第2个回答  2017-01-13
我来试着改下吧,给楼主当个参考Thelinechartrevealsthetendencyofconsumptionoffish,beef,lamb,andchickeninaEuropeancountryduringtheperiodfrom1979to2004.Accordingtotheinformationgraph,beefandlambkeptthefirstandthesecondpositionsofconsumptionin1979(220gramsand150gramsrespectively).However,overtime,theydroppedrapidlyuntilatthebottomlineof100gramsand50gramsin2004.Incontrast,thecompositionofchickenincreaseddramatically,fromaround150gramsin1979to250gramsin2004.Inaddition,itshowsclearlythatthetrendofconsumptionoffish,lamb,andchickenfluctuatedbetween1979and2004.Morespecifically,thefluctuationoffishwasinanaveragerange(around50grams).Inconclusion,chickenbecamemorepopularfoodthanotherthreekindsinthisEuropeancountrybetween1979and2004.
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