第1个回答 2011-06-17
June the twentieth of 2008,Sunday,sunny.
This afternoon we joined the activity of helping the cleaner cleanning the rubbish in the park.
While the weather was hot and the amount of rubbish was a lot,we finished the mission.
we were glad to see the clean park though the work was tiring.
we will work harder to do more for the park and the places for people's resting.
单词简单明了，没有半句废话，而且没有错误，其中使用的语法知识在你的水平上基本可以接受。正在准备6级，算是我考前的即兴发挥吧。
第2个回答 2011-06-16
Date: June 20, 2008
Sunday, Sunny
I had a very meaningful day today.
In the afternoon, I volunteered in the park, and helped staff there to clean up garbage. I was so tired after work, but when I saw the clean and beautiful park, I felt so happy and proud. I will continue volunteering in the park and keep the park clean and tidy in order to give people a good place to relax.
Word数过的，74个字。本回答被提问者采纳
第3个回答 2011-06-16
On Sunday afternoon,June 20th,2008,we took part in an activity in the park that in the center of our city.It was a sunny day,and all of us that came there enjoyed ourselves because of the happiness of labor.
We helped the cleaners clean the park and sweep away most of the rubbish there.Though it was tired cleaning the park,it pleased us deeply inside.Because we thought that it was meaningful to help to make a beautiful and comfortable place for the citizens.
At last,I want to say,to give but not to recieve,and this can make you a kind person and make others happy.
绝对原创喔！！我初三的，咱们水平应该差不多，90多词，字数也正好合适。希望采纳哦！
第4个回答 2011-06-19
Date: June 20, 2008
Sunday, Sunny
Today, I had a very unforgetful day. Because I took part in the activity as a volunteer to clean up the park in the afternoon. We help the hardworking cleaners pick up the rubbish.After a short busy work, the park is very clean and beautiful.We are tired but very happy. I am proud of doing this. So I decide I will work hard later.And make a contribution to our park .SO people will have a clean place to rest.
字数：88， 希望对你有用！