第1个回答 2012-07-10
可以从不同的角度翻译，体现不同的侧重点：
With an elevation of 24730 meters, St. Bernard, connecting Switzerland to Italy, is the highest mountain in Europe.
或者再换个角度： Switzerland and Italy are connected by St. Bernard which, with an elevation of 24730 meters, is the highest mountain pass in Europe.
或：As the highest mountain pass in Europe, St. Bernard is 24730 meters above sea level and connects Switzerland to Italy.
或用 make ...of这个词组： The elevation of 24730 meters makes the highest mountain pass in Europe of St. Bernard, which connects Switzerland to Italy.
你的有点语法错误，首先，elevation 24730 meters 这个短语错了，而且跟后面改用逗号隔开，其次就是 which该引导非限制定语从句。
第2个回答 2012-07-10
With the elevation of 24730 meters, St. Bernard is Europe's highest mountain, which connects Switzerland to Italy.
你的错误在于，which修饰的是这座山，所以要放在mountain后面
另外，少了逗号本回答被网友采纳
第3个回答 2012-07-10
elevation不能这样用，改为with an elevation of 24700 meters, St....或者用24700 meters above sea level, St....,修饰固定物，用that好些，不需要紧跟修饰词。
第4个回答 2012-07-10
appearing -there is, that the reasult was caused-for this is, the 有错误哦，第一句就有，它缺少动词。appearing在这个句子里不是动词，第二句
第5个回答 2012-07-12
先行词是mountain,有最高级修饰，必须用that引导。。。。。。。关于哪些情况下必须用that而不能用which引导，你可百度