It is universally acknowledge that economy is traditional virtue , the truth of it is self-evident , while most of people have formd unrealistic picture of economy , they disregard the importance of it without being conscious that thay are doing anything immoral .
Nowadays , economy is playing an unprecedental part in our daily life and exerting great influence on our next generation , though our economic level , to some extent , have been improved greatly , yet our achievement is at the cost of overdue of consumption of material resources , besides , an increasing mass of people come to realize the influence of economy since there are limited rescouses can be exploited . which has become a sort of threat to the survival of our human .
Considering all the above-mentioned , in my conception , lt is long-time tradition in chinnese culture that we should attach great importance to economy , and never have we enjoyed so much prosperity with so little worries , and it is high time we did something helpful and constructive for our next generation.
白痴，不知道你的62%的采纳率是怎么得到的，每句话都有错误？那你先指出5个错误先给我看看？
追答无知，还无理。何止五个，十几个都有了。
第一句话：It is universally acknowledge (改为acknowledged )that economy is traditional virtue , the truth of it ( 改为which )is self-evident , while most of people have formd unrealistic picture of economy , they disregard the importance of it without being conscious that thay are doing anything immoral .人家都说了两个了。我补三个：self-evident后面的逗号改为句号。formd改为formed。thay改为they。这第一句话就有五个错误，向别人请教没你那样的。让我告诉你，你的作文最大的问题不是语法的问题，而是对英语的感悟的问题。可以说，你写的文章，根本就不是英语。
我把我原来想对你说的话改了下，首先你说“每一句都有错误”实在太过分了，你说我写的不是英语不是文章----我想，不认识你的人或者是你的朋友都会认为你很自大，因为你根本在这方面没有任何权威，而且这是全盘否定，我想这个时代不需要只会批判的人，如果你继续用这种思维模式，我相信你不会成功，希望你站在我的角度考虑，我只需要改错，不需要全盘否定，如果你是一个老板建议你改成任何人的错误之前，先说优点再说缺点。
追答每一句话都有错误这说的过分了？你对你自己的英语没有正确的认识？我的英语是不是权威不一定，但是一定能做你的权威。我至少在国外留学，拿了学位，英文论文发表在英语学术期刊上。看看是不是有资格说你这里每句话都有错误。收回你“白痴”那两个字，让我帮你看看是不是每句话都有错：
第二句话：Nowadays , economy is playing an unprecedental （改为unprecedented） part in our daily life and exerting great influence on our next generation ,（改为句号） though（大写） our economic level（复数） , to some extent , have been improved greatly , yet our achievement is at the cost of overdue（overdue一般不做名词） of consumption of material resources ,（改为句号） besides , an increasing mass of people come to realize the influence of economy since there are limited rescouses （加一个that）can be exploited . 这句话的最大问题是，你根本不知道英语的句子哪里应该是句号，哪里应该是逗号，粘连句很问题很多。自己看看这句话有没有错！
第三句： which has become a sort of threat to the survival of our human .这句话本来就错了，定语从句是不能单独成句的。另外，our human说法不正确。这句话有错吧？
最后一句：Considering all the above-mentioned（悬垂结构。这里用considering，后面应该用I来做主语） , in my conception （没有这种说法）, lt is （a） long-time tradition in chinnese culture that we should attach great importance to economy（你这句话说，中国文化的传统式很看重经济，这句话很空洞） , and never have we enjoyed（这里不能用倒装） so much prosperity with so little worries（little只能形容不可数名词） , and it is high time we did something helpful and constructive for our next generation.你的文章最大的问题是空洞，没有细节，通篇都是空话。句式过于复杂导致错误频频，现在你明白了吗？
现在再来说，我说的每句话都有错，过分了吗？孩子，记住，虚心接受建议，甚至批评，才是能成功的唯一之道。As to writing English compositions, I think the most important thing is that you read a lot of books and check your dictionary frequently when you write.
....我错了....sorry,不过economy是节约的意思，不是经济....你写了这么多，实在辛苦了
追答呵呵，这个词有两个意思，economy既可以指经济，又可以指节约，读了那么就，居然看不出你写的是节约。。。更说明你的作文有问题了。你说，如果把你的节约的意思完全换成经济，这篇文章依然讲得通，说明你写的文章没有什么细节，都是一些空话和套话。