Currently,without a doubt,many companies has raised young blood into their high positions. In the meantime ,weather old staff especially those above 55,should give their places to the young colleagues , has also sparked spirited debated.
The following essay will deliberately demonstrate this issue from two aspects.
觉得我最后一句前面要加一个连词,你们觉得加什么会比较好,或者是我这一段这样写有什么问题么?