第1个回答 推荐于2018-05-18
商务信最重要的是分清类别和语气,你陈述的这种情况比较偏向于咨询函(向对方要求信息)。但是我不明白什么是起重业(?),我理解为起重机械制造吧。
Dear Sirs:
I am planning to attend a meeting with a lifting appliances corporation next week ,with whom an establishment of business relations would considerably increase our firm's turnover.
We are supposed to give a 30-min product introduction, and shall appreciate it if you could let us have some concrete information about the specific function , parameters and price of our product, its advantages when comparing to the competition's,its present market share and after-sales technical support ,etc.
Any information you give would be treated with strict confidence and we await your early reply.
Yours faithfully
John Smith
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