雅思大作文开头段怎么写??

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第1个回答  2020-10-12

1)场景或background信息,即题目中出现的phenomenon。

2)某些人的观点(some people’s opinion),这部分在改写文章首段时可根据实际情况选择是否需要。

3)个人观点,这一部分在有些文章的开首段中也可以不要。

大作文要求字数至少达到250字,在写作中考虑到字数的合理安排,第一段比较好写3-5句话,大约45字左右,并且切忌在第一段就把outline的内容都说完。因此大作文开头段方式通常有以下几种情况:

a)题目中包含了背景信息(background information),有时也出现一些人的观点,并且题目中字数较多。这种情况下比较保险的办法是将题目中的背景信息及一些人的观点重新表达(paraphrase),可以做:

●某些近义词互换

●主谓宾<=>主系表

●主动语态<=>被动语态

Example:

At present, it is hard for college students to find jobs. Many people claim that college teachers should give priority to practicalcourses like computer science and business over such traditional ones as history and geography. To what extent do you agree?

→ The number of college graduates is surging while a substantial proportion of them have difficulties in finding employment after their graduation. Numerous people blame this on the university education and believe that more emphasis should be laid on practical courses such as computer science and business than on traditional courses like history and geography. 其后再加考生自己的观点即可。

b)题目中包含了背景信息,有时出现一些人的观点,但题目中字数较少,若直接重新表达,字数凑不到45字左右。这种情况下我们有2种开头方式来保证字数。

◆把笼统信息细节化即通过举例来解释说明题目中的背景信息。(比较好衔接得自然一点)

Example:

International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?

→The acceleration of globalization and high-tech development contributes to International tourism’s gaining momentum virtually all over the world. Each year,millions of tourists from other countries swarm into china to appreciate the scenery and Chinese traditional culture. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。

◆回顾历史,古今对比。

Example:

International tourism has become a big industry in the world. Do the benefits outweigh the problems?

→Prior to the early 1900s, the proportion of people traveling abroad was considerably low and the majority of them preferred domestic travel. However, the advent of the motorized flight has greatly changed our life and it makes international traveling more convenient. International tourism is gaining momentumand has become a big industry. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。

c)题目中仅出现一部分人的观点,而没有背景信息。这种情况下,我们可以根据这部分人的观点所涉及的information在开首段附加对背景信息的描述。

Example:

The best way to solve the world’s environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?

→In the process of industrialization and urbanization, the scope of environmental problem facing the world is getting immense. From Mexico City and New York to Singapore and China new solutions to this problem are being proposed, tried and implemented. Some people believe increasing the price of fuel is the best approach to this problem. 其后加入考生个人观点即可。

另外考生要注意

雅思

大作文开头段

一定要避免出现语法错误,因为语法错误会影响考官对文章的理解,那会给考官留下极差的第一印象,而考官也就没有信心继续往下读了,比较终大作文的得分也不会很高。雅思大作文其实看重得并不是你的观点内容有多创新,考官看重得是你能否准确使用语言来表达你自己的观点,所以准确规范更为重要。

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