请检查一下有没有语法错误

Question

Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm a high school student.I like this pramground very much,especially is the English songs.I'm busy in studing,but when I feel tired,I will turn on the radio and listen to it.I can always study some words from the English songs,And "My Heart Will Go On"is my favorite,I want song's words of it.Could you give me one?
Yours sincerely,
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最后一句的意思是”我最喜欢我心依旧这首歌，希望得到歌词”
还有节目是不是用”pramground”?

Answer 1

1.I like this pramground very much,
“节目”打错字了，，，是programme(英式英语)或者program（美式英语）

2.especially is the English songs.
去掉那个is就可

3.I'm busy in studing
“学习”又打错字了：I'm busy in studying

4.but when I feel tired,I will turn on the radio and listen to it.
建议你把这个句子和前面那个句子拆成两句。
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However, when I feel tired, I will turn on the radio and listen to it.

5.I can always study some words from the English songs,And "My Heart Will Go On"is my favorite,I want song's words of it.
这句话太长拉。。分开两句写..
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I can always study some new words from the English songs, and "My Heart Will Go On" is my favorite. So I would like to know the lyrics of this song.

6.Could you give me one?
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Could you please send me one?

仅供参考//。。

Answer 2

“<>”表示我觉得有问题的地方：

Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm a high school student.I like this 1<pramground> very much,especially 2<is> the English songs.I'm busy in studing,but when I feel tired,I will turn on the radio and listen to 3<it>.I can always <study> some words from the English songs,<And> "My Heart Will Go On"is my favorite,I want <song's words of it>.Could you give me one?
<Yours sincerely, >
×××

1、节目是：program；
2、is 不要；
3、最好用 you
4、studing,always doing sth；
5、and 小写；
6、歌词：word of this song；
7、名字要放右下角。

希望对你有用~~~~~呵呵

Answer 3

Dear DJ,
I'm a high school student. I like your program very much, especially the English songs. I’m busy in studying, but whenever I feel tired, I would like to turn on the radio and listen to the music. I want to learn some words from the English songs, and "My Heart Will Go On" is my favorite one, I want the lyric of the above song . Could you kindly give that to me?
Yours sincerely
×××
我建议你会学使用Office软件，word会自动修改一些拼写和格式错误。

Answer 4

节目是programme.
especially is the English songs.—〉especially the English songs.
studing—〉studying
I will turn on the radio and listen to it.—〉I turn on the radio and listen to it.
I want song's words of it.—〉I want to konw song's words of it.
Could you give me one? —〉Could you do me a favour?本回答被提问者采纳

Answer 5

Dear Sir or Madam,
I'm a high school student.I like this program very much,especially the English songs.I'm busy in studing,and when I feel tired,I will turn on the radio and listen to it.Usually,I can learn some words from the English songs.And "My Heart Will Go On"is my favorite.Can you send me its lyrics,please?
Yours sincerely,