Today I will talk about my hobbies.
I love sports and tennis is my favorite because apart from getting exercise, I can always have fun.【I think It's good for my health.】(宾语从句)
I like music too. Japanese music relaxes me. Even though I don't understand the lyrics, I still feel the beauty.
I'm also crazy about comics! 【It always brings me joy to read comics.】(主语从句, it指代to read comics 看漫画)【I could always learn a lot from them, which has made my life better. 】(which引导的定语从句)
其实动漫是anime /ˈænɨmeɪ/ 这个词是从日语引入英语 最好不要说cartoon 如果用的话 把comics换成anime;read comics换成watch anime。
没有过于复杂的句子 也不粗糙 用了三个适合口语的从句 (记住 口语里从句用不好宁可不用)
你原来的中文就有些问题 比如 我喜欢体育但我最喜欢打网球 这根本没有转折关系 我直接给你改过来了 还有为了前后文更通顺 句子顺序稍微做了一点变动 你好好背吧!加油!
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