【在线等！！急！！】一篇英语演讲稿求大神给些意见，内容是介绍自己，我打算是讲讲英语和我的故事，一分

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【在线等！！急！！】一篇英语演讲稿求大神给些意见，内容是介绍自己，我打算是讲讲英语和我的故事，一分钟左右
稿子: Hello everyone,it's a pleasure to meet you all.I am Oliver.I come from Xunzhou senior high school.This is my first time to make a speech about myself,I really enjoy the feeling when go stand on the stage.Now let me tell you something about me.
As you see,I am an outgoing boy.But before junior high school,I am so shy even afraid to tall to people I don't know.But since I contact English,this situation came to an end.Because English makes me to tall to others.Gradually I try to speak in front of many people.And from then on,I fell in love with English.So I join in this competition.This is my introduction.
That's all.Thank you for listening.

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